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fanart of [link] :)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all, very nicely pixelled, lovely translation.

Positives:
Love the hair, and the animation of the page turning, just great. The whole thing is just cute!

Negatives:
The one thing that bugs me is that fact that she is moving her head left and right yet the hair stays still. It looks like she is wearing a wig that is made of cement and can't move <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/i/i…" width="19" height="19" alt=":slow:" title="Slow"/> I think also if you moved the earrings when the head moved it would be more realistic movement.

All in all, however, I like this. It's quite simple but quite nicely made and well represented in pixels <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/>