Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
:iconmeninasuitcase:

Artist's Comments

:iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz:
:iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz:
my entry for the Big Emote Contest : [link] by
:iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz::iconunbalancedsexplz:
:iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz::iconbedsexplz:
this is my first massive emoticon :aww: i hope you like it :)
________________________________________ ________
wanna make you own massive emoticon? :) : [link]

Critiques


:iconkermodog:
Unfortunately, I personally don't feel that this is your best works yet, hence the mark. It's funny as hell, but the actual guts of it just seems a little rushed.

First of all, is the shading. Now, being MenInASuitcase, I would think that your pixel art would've been a little better. It's harsh, I know. :B But the shading on the pink one looks quite horrible and, once again, rushed. There is really no need to use non-standard dithering. In fact, standard dithering would definitely make things look so much cleaner and more appealing in this situation. The stretch of the dithering is the worst of what you've done here; it doesn't really smooth out the shades of colour on the biggie.

Second of all, the hands on the pink emote don't look great either. They look just as rushed as on the purple guy. What surprises me is that the indigo coloured emote, being bigger than the hands of the pink, is shaded much better. :B

Secondly, the text is alright, but not great. I like the idea of it fading in and out, but the text "ouch" seems a little unnecessary. The fading in and out is also a little choppy; the animation could be a little better.

However, the bed and the poor, little purple emote is pixelled fantastically. The animation is also great, as well as the expressions on both emotes. The tard face on the pinkie and the screaming horror on the purple emote is the true essence of emoting, and really finishes the emote off nicely, hence the 5 star for Impact. That's what gives it the lols all around. :lol:

Overall, it could be worked on a little, paticularly on the shading, but the emote still gets the laughs and message across.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
406 out of 501 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


:iconsinister-starfeesh:
lol :iconteheplz:

--
Sini: Ridding your computers of zombies since 1990

Avatar: By teh awesome =Marc-pHX :love:
:icontajii-chan:
XD He's adorable~! <3

And you did a great job on it~ Especially for your first time! ^_^

Good luck~! ^o^

--
:heart: Colors make the world go 'round~! ^o^ :heart:
:iconartist-enjoi-drawing:
roflmfao ahahhahahahahah I LOVE IT XDXDXD You shohuld make more sex ones :3

--
Emotes Photographs
:iconalphore:
lol wow, thats awesome

--
~Show me that you love me and that we belong together. Relax, turn around and take my hand~

~This may hurt a little, but its something you'll get used to. Relax, slip away~

~Pain and comfort. Till you will not want me any other way~
:iconmaganius:
XD WTF?!

--
Die Wahrheit will niemand hören, sie bietet nichts. Sie ist einfach nur Wahr.
:iconmetalshadowoverlord:
Up the butt! XD

--
-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
:iconagushcullen:
:XD:!! It's AMAAAAAZING XD

--
XoXo,

×C ~

Avatar by =MenInASuitcase :dummy:~

Watashi Himeko Yanai!

Whatever happened to the american dream? It came true-- you're looking at it. (C) The Comedian, 1977 Watchmen~
:icongalerianxkadaj:
:iconwoahplz: oh my goodness, this looks like pain xDD

great job dear, keep it up ;D :rose:

--
Does it really need a reason to help someone?
",

Details

July 14
39.6 KB
18.2 KB
100×100

Statistics

987
2,062 [who?]
49,794 (76 today)
18,676 (289 today)

Site Map