Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
:MentalPower: by MenInASuitcase :MentalPower: by MenInASuitcase
:giggle: just an idea i got :lmao: i hope you like it :)

i looked at this pixel explosion to do mine : [link] :) made by :iconthe-titan:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconkermodog:
Critique by Kermodog Jul 16, 2009, 7:34:30 AM
Wow, I love the concept. I can see some flaws in it, but I can understand why. Anyways, let's get on with the critique:

First of all, as I said I love the concept. Simple, but really effective. The whole ';powering up' and the focusing for the explosion is great. At first, I couldn't understand at all what the toilet speech bubble meant; a little confusing, maybe something a little clearer for the slight mental disabled like me? :B
The blue highlights in the explosion is great as well; I would have just gone mainstream and done a red explosion. :lol: I also love the colours. They contrast, and make it really easy to look at over and over again.

The animation is fine. The bounciness, the fluidity of expressions, the speech bubble and concentrating is sweet!
However, the explosion could use a bit of work, which is understandble. They only look good if they're perfect. I have trouble with them. To me, the explosion looks too fast; the actual boom is a little hard to see, and the smoke just disappears strangely, just slightly too quick. I can see you used the same tutorial I used when I was making 'em. Still, the splosion is not great, hence the 3 star technique. But, with practice, your explosions should dominate in no time. :B They're hard to do, personally.

There is another thing that bugs me though; is the perspective of the expressions. I'm not sure if it's intended, but it looks really strange. The : D grin is odd; I can't describe it, but the mouth should end, on both emotes, directly or under the eyes. It shouldn't go beyond, depending on which way he is facing. You'll need to look closer at other emotes if you're wondering what I rambling on about. :paranoid:

However, I do like this emote. It's great. Keep up the good work! :dummy:
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
31 out of 31 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconxskylarbearx:
xSkylarBearx Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconMentalPowerplz:
Reply
:iconxskylarbearx:
xSkylarBearx Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:MentalPowerplz:
Reply
:iconxskylarbearx:
xSkylarBearx Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:MentalPower:
Reply
:iconm-katt2554:
M-Katt2554 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconmentalpower: >.< Did it work?
Reply
:iconc00lpics:
c00LpicS Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
cool :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
=p x3
Reply
:iconmcrkarol:
mcrkarol Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bloo emote:He wantz to go to the bathroomz!!!
Orange emote: Grrr!!!

BOOM!!

LOL.
I love eeeeeeth!!!
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009
:XD: lol! :lol: thank you
Reply
:iconmcrkarol:
mcrkarol Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!!! :)
Reply
:iconblazingblueflash:
BlazingBlueflash Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, he's like silver. Only without the gayness-ness XDDD.

Shuushh, don't tell the Silver fans bout wat I said.........they can sense insults :iconimskepticalplz:.
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
:faint: i know but it still would make me laugh to see this emoticon so i had to draw it xD
Reply
:iconemmuls:
Emmuls Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
this, is great and funny:lmao:

Fabulous Faby:clap::hug:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
thank you :aww:
Reply
:iconemmuls:
Emmuls Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome:hug:
Reply
:iconlittleprinceyuki:
LittlePrinceYuki Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
Il est trop fort :cuddle:

Fabrice :heart: c'est le beeeessttt.
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
merci :3
Reply
:iconlorikacid:
Lorikacid Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009
For the orange emote, I'm having a guess that happened during the stay on the toilet seat. :nod:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
:giggle: lol
Reply
:icontifa22:
Tifa22 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:lmao:

Oh, and you've got a new avatar! D'aww, it's cute! :aww:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
thank you :glomp:
Reply
:icontifa22:
Tifa22 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome ^^
Reply
:iconoktanas:
Oktanas Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
looks funny
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
thank you :aww:
Reply
:iconbeachluvey345:
beachluvey345 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
heh i enjoyed watching this for a while :] nice idea
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
thank you :glomp:
Reply
:iconryusukeminami:
Ryusukeminami Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Haha =) :mwahaha:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
:mwahaha: thank you
Reply
:iconryusukeminami:
Ryusukeminami Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
^^ de rien
Reply
:iconprasetu:
prasetu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
The toilet speech bubble is the greatest!
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
thank you :giggle:
Reply
:iconwiredseeker:
WiredSeeker Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
HAHAHA he flipped his lid
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
thank you =p
Reply
:icondrummerxkiller:
Drummerxkiller Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Student General Artist
J'aime pas mal le concept, et je trouve que l'explosion est pas mal bien faite, contrairement à ce que la critique raconte. Par contre, c'est bien vrai qu'elle ne dure pas assez longtemps.Et tu pourrais m'expliquer la toilette je t'empris =P
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
merci =p pour les toilette c'est un peu compliquer enfet son expression facial quand il veut faire exploser le bleu ressemble a la tête que quelqu'un peu faire quand il va au toilette x3
Reply
:icondrummerxkiller:
Drummerxkiller Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Student General Artist
Tout ce comprend maintenant! Très bonne idée :D
Reply
:iconthe-titan:
The-Titan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
haha your explosion needs some work, but a really nice start lol and thanks for the credit comrade c;
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:iconsecrethandshakeplz2: no prob :lol: thank you too =p
Reply
:iconpadme-naberrie:
padme-naberrie Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Haha, awesome!! :D It's amazing what the human mind can do xD
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:XD: thank you
Reply
:iconpadme-naberrie:
padme-naberrie Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
You're welcome xD
Reply
:iconpucky-chan:
Pucky-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I could get that to work in real life, I'd be a happy girl! XDD Great job!
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:XD: thank you
Reply
:iconpucky-chan:
Pucky-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very welcome^^ :heart:
Reply
:iconsparxle:
sparxle Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009   Digital Artist
haha if only that worked in real life!
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:XD: i would love too! thank you =p
Reply
:iconzerand9199:
Zerand9199 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
:evillaugh: it's so great!
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:mwahaha: thank you
Reply
:iconzerand9199:
Zerand9199 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:evellaugh: you're welcome
Reply
:iconlove-lalala:
Love-LaLaLa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
muahahahahah.i love it :hug:
Reply
:iconmeninasuitcase:
MenInASuitcase Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
thank you =p
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
July 16, 2009
Image Size
28.3 KB
Resolution
50×50
Thumb

Stats

Views
3,448 (3 today)
Favourites
415 (who?)
Comments
130
Downloads
93
×